Shaken Soul Comments

A sublime start with a nice poem, Shweta. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you much

nice lines.... ideas well described....and the messages are there for the taking well done :)

With the very first poem you touched the soul Time, the most powerful.....and the following lines are psychological search Your poetry is not just rhyming lines. It carries powerful thought. Keep writing Shweta. -KAVIN CHARALAN

You are philosophical as well as psychological in thinking and you have wonderful expression. You will be one of the shining examples of the Indian poets writing in English. 1

hi shweta! your invitation to read your poems gave me a chance to know that there is a girl so sensitive n so promising...and she writes so cute... :) ...being the learner of poetry i read all the 4 poems which i really liked...for all the depth, the underlying thought as well as the apparent garb of the poetry...the language, the couplets n rhyming in which, i saw, you are very good...you have an inborn talent dearest.you said one must know how to swim but you know we don't swim after learning how to swim, a daring dive into water first..and then...on and on...

shweta gulia ?thanks for your message! you have a sense of making poems! and I have been amazed at your age, only 17! ! How could you manage to get all the words into your poem! I think you have talent!

Really heart touching poem.

i like it. i will admit, i was little confused at first, but then it all came together. you are a good poet

A really great poem like it, a great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, An Angel Cries.