Shake And Wake Comments

A good write and equally in each poem that I have read you point out and dwell on the bad things man does to each other. Now try to tell them what they need for salvation and to be able the know that they are going to Heaven if they change their ways. God is Good. Lynn

You go over what everybody knows very deep true, but since time began man has sinned big time.... now suicide bombers....51 million deaths to get rid of Adolph Hitler...Ethnic religions carve each other up...Moral family life yes...don't know the answer but poetry is not one of them...kind regards

Again, Gregory you write interesting religious poems.' we choose to lie to ourselves to amend for our mistakes/destroying our souls in self righteousness'. I'm going to simplify the narrator's aforementioned verses: for 'self' to be 'righteous all other selves have to be worng. Seems to me logic does not fit into this fact. therefore, any statement that has no logic, then is it fair to believe that it's merely a myths or legends that has been sited for thousands of years and no one is alive to refute its reality or truth.Thanks for inviting me to read your amazing poem that is that explains and point out the significance of living a moral and religious life.

Great poem my friend. Self righteousness is a killer..births, pride, arrogrance to name a few. Another inspired write. All of creation groans for the sons of God to be revealed.

regret, sel-forgivesness and mend to be better is the right path to take but sometimes sorrow and grief will took all our empathy and we become hallow. can't feel the pain, hurt, love nor mercy. Hope to find light and angels shall whispers into the mind, to wake and fight to be HUMAN again. Nice poem and reminder to those who betray essence of kindness in human; MORAL AND VALUE. good work.