Wednesday, February 7, 2007

Shake And Shiver Comments

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My girl where have you gone..?
I'm holdin onto your pillows, in your room with a quiver
Waiting for you to come home, I shake and I shiver
Thinkin where did I go wrong, I'm not sure so I grab my bong
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Leo Lopes
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Tahnee ? ? ? 11 February 2007

great poem honey, keep your head up high.

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Gabriella Franco 10 February 2007

o0o0o0o0o0o0o0ohhhhh.... chilling, darlin'. i'm sorry! ! ! you know... i do have a suggestion. im not tellin what to do, but i'm just puttin it out there: in a lot of your poems you talk about relying on your bong for comfort... maybe try, you know... praying or something, even if u dont think u believe in God... just talking to Him might help.... just a suggestion. great poem, mi leon! ! ! shake and shiver are AWESOME words...

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