Saturday, October 28, 2017

Shady September Comments

Rating: 5.0

the sky is neither blue nor gray
but something autumn in between
I close my eyes and smell the hay
September fields so far away
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Barry Middleton
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Dimitrios Galanis 28 October 2017

A beautiful paradise of sounds[especially those in au and a ] in a rich vocabulary and icons with the last verse to show what for or because we enjoy the way we live our life, for LOVE.Kudos, Barry.

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Lamar Cole 28 October 2017

Very nice poem about shady September.

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