Monday, May 10, 2021

Shadow's Veil - A Nonet Comments

Rating: 5.0

hushed silhouette breezes tango
honey lips dare whisper his name
when dawn gently awakes, he
will not be beside her
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Lisa Arnold
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 May 2021

Beautiful nonet; enjoable to read

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 May 2021

Eventhough the first line misses the 9 syllables, an excellent read, dear poetess! @ I have enjoyed very much.

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M Asim Nehal 11 May 2021

Nice poem, I liked the flow and the tone.5***

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