! ...Shadows (Part 3) Comments

yes. so you are proud. there is not a place so worthy to live than heart and the heart you dreamed. good wishes for these poems

God in heaven, Holy be your name Thy kingdom come, Thy will be done.... All I can say is a prayer and hope... You continue in stead and move From strength to strength... Such a Beautiful poem. Sincere thanks from the bottom of my heart. Yours is a true work of art.

Hmmm... After reading two parts in a row now comes the third one... It seems you are growing fast in the art of poetry, lovely and now spirituality... A maturing one... Keep growing as there is no end to progress in the domains of love, mindfulness and truth...

Seema, You have now become a specialist in writing this type of modern poetry! I enjoyed reading it! I too wish you a very happy Dewali! In fact I have also wised all my readers the same today at the end of my poem, - 'Plato's Cave Allegory', which you may like to read! - Raj Nandy

well writen nice poem

well penned i liked these - 'The penumbra inside me Merged with the extensive shadow Of the everlasting monument of love…! ' ++10 anju

A good love poem. This speaks as if Juliat spoke

another very passionate poem with floating sentiments in the sea of love....thanks for sharing and surely wining 10's

Seema, your 'Shadow' poems are all passionate, & the down to earth realism is good! For who has seen 'heaven' or Plato's concept of 'the Good'? ! Yet I would like you to have a peek into the spiritual world, by requesting you to read my poem ' My Shadow', written last year! - Raj Nandy

hmmm... the soup got u some where else didnt it? well done

love... growing pyramid high... casting monumental shadow deep inside...10

Something happended beyond happening. 10 for this beautiful poem.

cozy composition wherein love has awaken the sleeping giant inside the heart...a 10.

second is the best like the Judgement Day followed by the third like Rise of Machines....wonderful presentations and sequels

Seema! Your poems are very passionate, sometimes flowing like a small rivulet smoothly, sometimes gushing with fierce sentimets and descriptions. Your shadow series is too good; reminds me the 'affair de coer' series by Indira Babbellapati.........But don't go with too many sequels....it may become stale...................................10