! ...Shadows (Part 2) Comments
His feelings raced to
The pinnacle of desire
Seeking an urgent intimacy
Of his corporeal requests
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great work of art friend. i am wordless to praise. very much dominant one
unafraid, uninhibited...expressive and eloquent. the purity of your soul comes through and as with good music, good poetry needs soul which is there in this one. well done.
I read this part 2, right after commenting on first part and what I hypothesized in that comment has got acknowledged by you in this one… :) Beautiful indeed… Really a work of art…
deadly punch of passion energised with love and seasoned by imagery, , , ,
Like a sweet dreams of endless craving of sweet love.....bygone in an unwanted manner.
a passionate write with the sumnbeams of romance reaching the pinnacle
sensually poetic lines are so amazingly placed well, romance filled the air so much because of this... a 10+++.
The magic of intuitions is amazingly expressed. Crystal clear and expressive. Thank you very much for this poem. sarvesh
you are very romantic may ur partner also be as romantic as u r
suddenly there is a rush of poems running on the same lines...i have a read more than half a dozen since the past two day...everyone is feeling good on ph! ...that have been said...your poem is beautiful and perfect....well done
sizzling....so romantic...only women can express completely feminish feelings of romantics................10
at last love is completed, very nicely done ma'am....thanks for sharing..another 10+
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7/19/2025 3:37:26 PM # 1.0.0
I would love to hear you read this delightful poem and enjoy the emotion resonated within you. Love this poem.....