Sunday, October 20, 2019

Shadows Of The Reeds Comments

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In a brown road of fences and walls vines leech
to sliding roofs as cocoa dances
to creaks that swing into orange beds
and fields when ‘very fine legs'
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Robert Dummett
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2019

From crustaceans to coconuts I enjoyed your imagery for it pictures the beach as I know it too since I live near the coast and your muse around it is sublime and awesome to read of. Kudos. Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too titled, ' smart phones and smart cars...."

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