Friday, August 14, 2009

Shadows Of The Mind Comments

Rating: 4.8

You walk the shadows of my mind
Bringing forth the memories I hold in my heart
Flashing them before me
Reel to reel of golden times play or’ and or’
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Patricia Gale
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Jazib Kamalvi 05 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Gale. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 25 May 2016

You walk the shadows of my mind Bringing forth the memories I hold in my heart Flashing them before me Reel to reel of golden times play or’ and or’ Visions of laughter and love Images of the fair and beyond Sinking deep within….. Until my heart joins the bottom of my soul Beautiful poem written with such a great poetic skill. 10 marks. Thanks for sharing this poem. Subhas

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Fay Slimm 14 August 2009

Warm reflective poem Patricia - and filled with tender pathos.... lovely read... greetings from Fay.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 14 August 2009

A good contemplative poem.

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