Sunday, June 8, 2008

Shadows Of Death Comments

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footsteps echo
bouncing from one thick wall
to the next
the heart beat races
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sabrina helphrey
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Wendy Bureau 16 July 2008

Well they do say that death is very much a part of life.. even if it's fully concealed within the shadow's realm.. Alot said in this write.. Powerful piece young poetess! Write On! !

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WOW! ! ! Very deep. for a few words in a poem great work

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~ Jon London ~ 08 June 2008

Very deep expression...shadows are the keepers of light keep up this gift best wishes Jon

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