Shadows In The Dusk Comments
As the Sun
Seeps into the bones,
A gust of wild wind
Carries an uneven blow
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With a smell of stale conjugation From the distant shores of life, Drifts into my blood. A poem rich with lots of imageries. Thanks for the sharing. Nice write. 10++
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem 10+++++++++++
The tired afternoon Crushes the wild buds of desire Grinds the crystals of sweet dreams Into powders of slow death To mix with my evening drinks. A great philosophical write sir. Thanks for the sharing. 10++++
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes, I agree with you dear.
With a smell of stale conjugation From the distant shores of life, Drifts into my blood. A poem rich with lots of imageries. Thanks for the sharing. Nice write. 10+++++
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Mitra.
Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. A nice poem. 10++
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dearBiswa.
I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. A great philosophy, nicely penned. A poem so nice to touch every heart. 10+++++++
Thank you dear Sanjukta for the nice remark and the evaluation.
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Mam.
I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. A great poem so nicely penned. 10+++
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Alina.
The tired afternoon Crushes the wild buds of desire Grinds the crystals of sweet dreams Into powders of slow death To mix with my evening drinks. A lovely poem on the after age. Thanks for the poem. 10+++
Thank you Sonali dear for the nice remark and the evaluation.
I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. A great work on the after years and the shadow of memories. Nice write. 10++++
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Seema Mam.
As I start ruminating, Listening to the stories of- The youth of angry butterflies, The dreams of hungry pythons, The smells of drying plants in Autumn gardens of the alien, The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, A great poem of deep passion for life in the afternoon of life. 10+++++
Thank you dear Sabita for the nice remark and the evaluation.
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Sabita Mam.
The smells of drying plants in Autumn gardens of the alien, The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, A very nice philosophical poem, loved the core of this poem. 10++++
Thank you Priyanka for the nice remark and the evaluation.
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Didi.
I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Felt a similar pain of passing youth and the shadow of dusk on my life too. Subhas you wrote, this time, on some thing that relates to the soul. Nice poem dear, keep it up. 10++++++++
Thank you dear Neetu for the gracious reading, nice remark and the evaluation.
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Anita mam.
Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Lovely poem shared, thanks for the poem. 10+++
Thank you Surathta for the nice remark and the evaluation.
The tired Sun sets of The kissing lips, I doze, sitting on my couch Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart. Yes I agree with you dear Surath Sir.
Where the river of pain Snakes through The valley of shadowed heart.wow¡¡ what a beautiful poem shaired.i agree with you
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7/19/2025 3:32:19 AM # 1.0.0
It is a great poem it is a beautiful picture 10+++++