Thursday, December 8, 2016

Shadows Follow Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

shadows follow morning
for night is sweet relief
concealing pain in dreams
till day returns my grief
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 12 December 2016

That's your forte. Nobody depicts pain n loneliness better than you. A lovely use of imagery n metaphors. A10

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Barry Middleton 12 December 2016

Thanks Nosheen. One has to write what one knows.

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