Friday, August 30, 2019

Shadows Dance Comments

Rating: 4.5

Shadows dance in the mist, trees and leaves
dance like a woman removing her dress
a floral one-piece, fall's—drifts in the breeze
a swirling ballet dancer with finesse;
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Mark Heathcote
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 August 2019

This is a beautiful poem on shadow and dance having touching expression with nice collocation. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mark Heathcote 30 August 2019

Thank you, Kumarmani, glad you enjoyed it and the format.

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Uche Nwanze 30 August 2019

Shadow dance, so deep, nice lines. Thanks for sharing.

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Mark Heathcote 30 August 2019

Much obliged Uche Nwanze, thank you.

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