Thursday, March 26, 2015

Shadows Cast Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

our memories click emotions
re-presenting life our wick lives
demand selective screening
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Terence George Craddock
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M. Asim Nehal 26 February 2024

Wonderful haiku....I liked it.5*****

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 December 2020

Selective screening Click emotions Photoshop the shadows. Good reflections

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2020

Emotions, memories, happy and painful. beautiful and sad. Yes it demands selective screening. tony

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Michael Walker 01 February 2019

I am involved in that process now, memories and lasting emotions. A minimalist poem that says a lot to me.

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Mj Lemon 20 March 2017

And each click is a wave of the candle flame...and so a new memory is screened. Sensational imagery, Terry.

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Luo Zhihai 28 January 2017

A lovely poem. I like it.

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Cigeng Zhang 26 January 2017

our memories click emotions.I like your first line. True, some memories bring us joy; some sorrow.But memories make our life rich with stories.Enjoyed reading.

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Michael Walker 04 October 2016

Another good metaphor of a candle and the mind. M.Walker.

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Howard Savage 15 February 2016

Great poem with strong metaphors. Good writing.

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Howard Savage 25 January 2016

Great poem, keep writing. Memories are to me the shadows of ours lives. Great write. #10.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 31 December 2015

Love the images. Thank you, Terry Lawrence S. Pertillar

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 29 March 2015

A sublime haiku type poem with a great thought. I like how u put it, wick lives. Great to read u again.

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Terry Craddock 27 March 2015

ripples within ripples, your images are harmonic in my mind, inspire creativity waves, to return to your haiku Memories (Haiku) upon mental screen images from dusted times re-presenting life Mihaela Pirjol reflective introspective an inquiring mind must be past present interactive perceptive fix such minds focus defined contemporary reality :) the circle continues

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Mihaela Pirjol 27 March 2015

Memories [ re-presenting life ] a line, initially I thought will go unnoticed when I wrote my haiku; and here it is inspiring more creativity :)

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