Shadows Are Going Down Comments

A very intense and haunting write. Deep feelings are expressed in this write. Shadows will only remain for a short time the Sun will soon melt it away and the gloom will disappear. Time can only go forward. Good.

Dear Musfiq after reading thrice what I felt or thought..this is about the nation that has seen many ups and down, rich culture to the activity vulture the grief can be felt can't be seen or touched feeling is without form and keeps mental form but shadow that goes down or reduces its length at noon morning and evening elongated but The dawn comes in front of sun nice one a beautiful poem 10

A subliminal touches metaphorical twists poem! Very awesome. Pls coment my mr.bean poem.