Friday, January 11, 2019

Shadows And Silhouettes Comments

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Shadows and silhouettes
turns and pirouettes
time lives between the raindrops
life travels with no stops
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bri edwards 16 January 2019

don't hate me for saying: i thought this was to be a farm ppem about a leaky silo! Definition of silhouette 1: a likeness cut from dark material and mounted on a light ground or one sketched in outline and solidly colored in 2: the outline of a body viewed as circumscribing a mass i only stop for coffee if there's coffee cake wiith it. bri (:

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Aqua Flower 16 January 2019

Jeez! ! Is your middle name spellchecker? Ok...OK I did look it up and that is the spelling I got off the internet but you are correct and I will fix it! ...yes I do hate you in a loving way! lol

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Carl Roussell 11 January 2019

I hope I have understood the poem correctly when I say enjoy each moment for what it is and what you are able feel in that moment.

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Aqua Flower 12 January 2019

Yes, it is a mindfulness-type poem! Life goes on so we need to enjoy every moment with gratitude. Thank you for the interpretation. You interpreted the way I wrote it but of course the reader can always do their own interpretation.

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Kostas Lagos 11 January 2019

Rest and relaxation! That's a poem I love!

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Aqua Flower 12 January 2019

I knew you would! : :)

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Bill Cantrell 11 January 2019

Wonderful poerty! ! Shadows and silowets indeed soften the day for a release at night

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Aqua Flower 12 January 2019

Thank you! I like your comment!

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