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His shadow stretches away
Impatiently from him, as
He stood silently facing the
Setting sun on his balcony…
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A story from the world of love, from some distant valley i am confused if this poem is composed of words.......... or it is just the true feeling i am seeing wonderful
It is in times like these that I am speechless. I just want to sit down and listen to those words being said aloud Nothing else matters for its all there, complete in every respect. Even a breath of air would destroy its balance. Ash (Rishi's Dad)
Seema, I read through this poem and comments on it... no one understood the irony of this poem, not even me; commenting on it... There is something hidden like a Da Vinci Code in this painting of two new lovers beginning a new love life… But the dismal touch in the form of shadows makes it different and I would say you may have written it in reminiscence of a love story beginning with tentative love, spreading infectiously and then losing its charm… anyways, I just felt it that way and I may be wrong… A great read adorned with beauty of imagination, well versed and beautifully ends with a craving to have more… Regards, Kamran
seema means boundary. but your poetic world has no boundaries ++10
can see the light of candle in the darkness of mind...well written..
Made their dreams within the dream to be one... under the blanket of the night, fulfillment of souls more powerful as the heart yearns for...a 10.
Fulfilling poem. The depth of the poem is amazing. Thank you.
Some very strong emotion is missing, , , , , , , , , , , , is she a captive, , , , i do not understand, , , ,
two shadows waiting to set into one...signifying a rise...good imaginative write, Seema 10
his shadows --her shadows become one under the blanket of the nite. nice write seema do keep sharing +10 regards anjali (do read mine until death do us part)
I liked the sombre mood and mellowed tone you could bring into this poem....that easily takes the reader to another world........10 Pl.read my RENDEZVOUS and tell me how good it is.......
it surely is beautiful imaginary write with deep thoughts converted into words, thanks for sharing seema 10/10
Seema, - a great poem, especially your last para is really impressive! You may like my short poem, - 'My Shadow', though in a different concept. - Raj Nandy
fine imagery! .........'under the blanket of night'- Excellent! .......10+
great imagery u lookeout with a diiffeeretnt view point nic work kudos
Like the snake in the eagle's shadow...........lovers preying! i luvvit!
Anoher wonderful love poem. Jon Keats and W. Shakespeare diid not think as you did, when they wrote about sexual love. Can u inform your email?
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a resonant depiction! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !