Shadows Comments

I really like this poem. are you religious?

This is certainly a very good poem....it sounded me like a Vedic prayer...wonderful indeed....10

The fact that you are asking God for help, shows that you still believe there is hope. Trust in that help.

This has the structure and the rhymes are better. Overall, a good effort. I recommend it. GW62

that was a very beautiful poem.i really loved it~Hazel

Very good, i love your expression of emotion. it realy painted a scene, well done

Fine piece, lots of true emotion..heart felt write.. All the best Jon

A sincere poem to god, good one