I am a shadow
A dark shadow with frozen fire inside
Every glance that falls on me
Is a cannon ball that bears
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This is a very sad poem. It is terrible to see when lives- whether human or animal, is exploited and treated with cruelty and callousness. A touching write, Parameswaran ji.........10
A deeply moving and poignant write. A vivid portrayal of life's experiences. Excellently written with great imagery as always.
Thank you dear poetess for the encouraging words.Its really a matter of pain for me to see human beings are treated like shadows
Thank you very much dear poetess. It's painful for me to see human beings are treated like lifeless shadows
A nice poem on the ups and downs of life. Very nicely crafted to touch the heart. Loved it. 'Together with the booty of colourful life Looted from humble truths And leaving them as lifeless shadows.... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you dear AKP. The silent shadow that survives the cruel tetst of time represents the oppressed
how significantly you have given your version of life experience, , fine
Thank you dear poet for the comments. This shadow is the silent mind of the oppressed
Every glance that falls on me Is a cannon ball that bears The colour of toxic aversion....scintillating expression sir. An excellent poem.....top score!