Monday, October 22, 2018

Shadows Comments

Rating: 2.3

Image of a flying kiss from sun to the earth,
The shadow measuring an immeasurable worth.
Great love that has been passed on to the old lady,
O shy earth what do you hide below the berth?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 June 2022

This is an excellent poem....wonderfully expressed. Top score! ! Straight to my favorite! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2018

Sun gives amazing flying kiss to Earth. A brilliant poem of love and emotion is penned like magnetic sunlight. This is excellently penned.

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Kostas Lagos 22 October 2018

A great, well crafted poem! Thank you

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Kelly Kurt 22 October 2018

Only in full light can anything be truly understood.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 October 2018

excellent opinion on love and I am agree with you written exquisitely full poem and like to quote last stanza - I hate shadows that are made by extremism but To be an extremist in love I may rise like a tide A love that is too transparent to form a shadow A kiss on the windows' glass you on the other side!

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Bharati Nayak 22 October 2018

Image of a flying kiss from sun to the earth, The shadow measuring an immeasurable worth. Great love that has been passed on to the old lady, O shy earth what do you hide below the berth? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I hate shadows that are made by extremism but To be an extremist in love I may rise like a tide A love that is too transparent to form a shadow A kiss on the windows' glass you on the other side! - - - - -An amazing poem of love.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2018

SUPERB Poem! ! ! ! ! What appears as shadow of the original may not be the truth or true reflection yet you took the readers to a journey beyond it. A thoughtful poem.10+++

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