Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Shadows Comments

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Today I open my eyes
To the first day
That will not have you
To give it life.
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Les Derbyshire
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John Mcmanus 10 October 2009

I like this alot Les you capture the weight of your loss, so tenderly and elegantly, ver nicely done, top marks.

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Les Derbyshire 30 September 2009

Thanks for your comments friends. I hasten to add that this one is not autobiographical!

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Joseph Poewhit 29 September 2009

Speaks well of lost memo's

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