Shadows Comments

a poem of intense pain.....well written

I can feel the blood in my hand, your words so real and cool...a write that i can say a beautiful pain to read but yeah it pain to endure hahaha..i mean this is cool write :) , keep showing us your cool works_Unwritten Soul

lines filled with pain....i like it

nice wording, perhaps i can realy feel the deepening emotions here

This is an amazing 'write 'SG'! ! Very deep, dark, yet incredibly written! Nice! ! ! ! !

This is a very dark yet beautiful poem. I found every line immaculate...... Truly amazing. :)

Once again another truly great poem about, real pain, and a dark side that not many people ever see or feel. A fantastic write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, dream world.

There is a darkness that lives within us all, for without darkness, light cannot exist... I hope you find the light... There is a beautiful agony about this poem... I love it...