The shadows come
The shadows go
Usually when I'm weak
Or feeling really low
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Hello Lawerence, first thanks for your support and review. I loved your poem, well written and so true about those of us who have started going down hill. Thank you for your service, I salute. You might enjoy my poem, An Old Soldier. Great poem, I enjoyed, Loyd
I agree with Valerie, and certainly hope you remain here writing for many years to come! Good, thought-provoking poem here; I like these poems that give me cause to ponder.
Hope those shadows don't take you away yet Lawrence - great poem, very well penned.
Fear is a bunch of sinister shadows. A shadow has no substance, it's usually a magnified reflection of something small, that's why upon standing boldly before it, one often find it inconsequential. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with lovely rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.