Shadows Comments

gaunt shadows.... Up and down and up and down, we merge, emerge, submerge.............. then drown. Beautiful poem on shadows which sometimes emerge as real men or material. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate this amazing poem more so because it was written by the poet at a very young age. Congrats.

We drown in shadows starker still, shadows of the looming hills, shadows of sad selves we spill, fascinating lines. loved the musical quality of your poem. Thank you for sharing.

A great lyrical poem should be set to music. To be written so early show your promise. To my favorites.