Monday, July 31, 2006

Shadow Promises Comments

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Shadows of promises broken
Gloom within this page
Lightless thoughts keep dancing
Pain will never age.
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A.J. McKinley
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Lylyanna Pilewski 28 August 2006

I like that last line good poem. I liked it. Lylyanna

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Séamus Fox 31 July 2006

You use language very well love the title and concept of this poem very well done. Séamus

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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