come with me into the evening
come with me to the shadowy places
to the deepest reaches of the cave
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Amazing write Barry, the last 10 lines are absolutely pure perfect poetry! ! Amazing! ! !
Thank you Bill, I appreciate the high praise. The poem is intended to build to those last ten lines.
A temptation to translate! though I can not imagine how it could sound in my native words.
Me neither.