Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Shadow Of Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

Crawling sun in its youth
Playing games with human body

You’ve left me without any reasons
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 27 February 2016

Brilliant write man, good to read it.

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T Rajan Evol 24 October 2015

Art of writing a poem from sad to happy ending.Good write Asim.

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Sanjukta Nag 22 October 2015

Though the beginning is melancholic but you end up spreading hope in the sky of life. Wonderful as always.10++

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Kelly Kurt 21 October 2015

Inspirational and as always, well written

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Rajnish Manga 21 October 2015

A very thoughtful poem probing Tsunami and the devastation in its aftermath which ultimately brings peace and quiet to life. A quote: It is so hard to ponder on mistakes blame self or demons for every fails

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Mohamed Fazloon 21 October 2015

Wow that's a very beautiful poem. Well done, well written as usual!

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Loke Kok Yee 21 October 2015

Moving on is the right decision Thanks Asim-10

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M. Asim Nehal

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