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Rating: 4.8

SHADOW OF DREAM

dappled wings of love awe in void
as sultry wind blows on elysian bay
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Dr subhendu kar
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Udaya Shankar Pant 11 December 2009

very good and environmental! ..10 from me

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Jimmy Reed 18 October 2009

so beautiful...lovely write.......10

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Aziz Alkaabi 09 September 2009

If this is a shadow of a dream, the dream I think would be in Nervana. This so enchanting and delicately surreal. I read it slowly and contemplated between the lines. This is what the work of this astonishing author requires; patient slow read blended with respect and that desire to learn and cherish what you learn and I guarantee a soaring to serine places and elysian bays. I am so happy i started my day reading this superb poem. Thank you Dr. Subhendu for sharing your gift with us.

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there is a poet in me! 01 September 2009

so beautiful...lovely write....thanks for sharing....a10+++++

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Carol-Anne Spalding 07 July 2009

I adore this poem..so well written and communicated...you are a talent to be treasured

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Jaci Burns 06 July 2009

ITS GREAT I LOVE IT I GAVE IT A 10

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congratulation...............

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Bob Gibson 03 July 2009

A very intriguing poem, holds one captive!

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Ronald Doku 01 July 2009

great poem. has deep meaning.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 July 2009

From : Mubeen Sadhika (India ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/1/2009 5: 39: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : shadow of dream It is a nice, beautiful piece.

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Pancho Villa 01 July 2009

Excellent use of imagery! This poem is worthy of a 10.

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 01 July 2009

You are a great lover of nature it seem. The poem is great, Dr. Kar.

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Christina Phan 01 July 2009

This piece was wonderful Nice imagery I can picture this all clearly kept it up Dr 10++

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Poetic Soul 30 June 2009

Well written, I like the imagery of it as well.

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Danny H 30 June 2009

i lvoe the imagery, imagination, an devotion it was very beautiful. an insightful well done: keep on writing!

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Alycha Madrie 30 June 2009

beautiful 10+

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Adi Cox 30 June 2009

Very imaginative. The very idea of a dreams shadow is worth 10/10 in its own right.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 30 June 2009

Solid dream has its shadow and the warm insight is capable to see the night that awaits deep in lone silence. ….. And the silence ruins the sleep while hot breeze inhales. But same time the eyes are on jingling trees. Dear doctor, your emotional heart is filled with 7000 colors of rainbow. It is a colorful shadow (of dream) ….

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Nikunj Sharma 29 June 2009

i never knew that dreams have shadows, until I read your poem...wonderful imagination....pls spare ur precious moments to read two of my poems called MY DREAM and SPOONERISM OF MY LIFE....Shall be grateful for your comments

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Howard Kern 29 June 2009

Nice mixture of nature to feelings. I don't know where Elysain Bay is, but you sure make it sound very nice! thanks for sharing.10

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