SHADOW OF DREAM
dappled wings of love awe in void
as sultry wind blows on elysian bay
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If this is a shadow of a dream, the dream I think would be in Nervana. This so enchanting and delicately surreal. I read it slowly and contemplated between the lines. This is what the work of this astonishing author requires; patient slow read blended with respect and that desire to learn and cherish what you learn and I guarantee a soaring to serine places and elysian bays. I am so happy i started my day reading this superb poem. Thank you Dr. Subhendu for sharing your gift with us.
so beautiful...lovely write....thanks for sharing....a10+++++
I adore this poem..so well written and communicated...you are a talent to be treasured
From : Mubeen Sadhika (India ;) To : Dr.subhendu Kar Date Time : 7/1/2009 5: 39: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : shadow of dream It is a nice, beautiful piece.
You are a great lover of nature it seem. The poem is great, Dr. Kar.
This piece was wonderful Nice imagery I can picture this all clearly kept it up Dr 10++
i lvoe the imagery, imagination, an devotion it was very beautiful. an insightful well done: keep on writing!
Very imaginative. The very idea of a dreams shadow is worth 10/10 in its own right.
Solid dream has its shadow and the warm insight is capable to see the night that awaits deep in lone silence. ….. And the silence ruins the sleep while hot breeze inhales. But same time the eyes are on jingling trees. Dear doctor, your emotional heart is filled with 7000 colors of rainbow. It is a colorful shadow (of dream) ….
i never knew that dreams have shadows, until I read your poem...wonderful imagination....pls spare ur precious moments to read two of my poems called MY DREAM and SPOONERISM OF MY LIFE....Shall be grateful for your comments
Nice mixture of nature to feelings. I don't know where Elysain Bay is, but you sure make it sound very nice! thanks for sharing.10
very good and environmental! ..10 from me