Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Shadow Of Doubt: Broken Promises Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think that there is a point in every person's Life where yo come to he realization that 'pinky promises' can be broken and often are. You come to a hard realization that the world isn't black and white and despite you trying to cling to your childhood idealism, the world isn't fair. For some this comes early....

You're the beacon of Truth to my midnight Life.
Lighthouse to my ocean of doubt.
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Tabitha Castillo
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Howard Johnson 18 March 2008

a excellent write Tabitha, with a strong last four lines.quality from start to finish

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LOVEFOOL Aka 18 March 2008

Wow very powerful and stark very good

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Tabitha Castillo

Tabitha Castillo

Long Beach, California
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