Saturday, October 13, 2007

Shadow Of A Lost Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

a shadow
just darkness
upon a wall
it is all that remains
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Scarlet .....
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Alison Cassidy 19 October 2007

A melancholy piece, concisely penned. I like your last couplet in particular. A good example of 'less is more'. love, Allie xxxx

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Uloia Norris Moore 18 October 2007

I will always believe. The cotext emotion expresses by you Thank for the vast sums of your mind so known here.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 17 October 2007

Wow, that had a real emotional beat to it... I love it.

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