Thursday, October 23, 2008

Shadow (In The Silent Hour) Comments

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Shadow, in this silent hour-my soul in the field of dying flowers.
Seeking someones hand-vultures in the sky, this is the dying land,
this is where I stand.
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Justin Unanue 07 November 2009

The rhyme scheme brought this poems depressing nature to life. It was also short simple and universal, in my opinon a great poem.

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C T Heart 23 October 2008

great piece of state description, a place where you stand...short but meaningful, poetically explanatory.. a 10.

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