Shadow-Dancing Comments

picture runs in my mind while reading your lines.....a dance said by words...much creative and charmin....wonderful write.......mere daffodil....sebastine.....

The picturisation of the dancer is enthralling.. I liked the line 'silence her clamour' a great deal... very beautiful..

The theme of a dancing girl is always enthralling, , treated here with very finre words and stanzaic pattern, , , lovely read, ,10

shadows keep on dancing in the poem. it reminds me old civilizations. Nicely penned.

fine verse, you made your beautiful words dance to the tunes of your exquisite pen

beautiful poem-the whole one was like a singing nartaki to me well penned-10 anjali

very nice and descriptive poem. take care

is earth the dancer here?

Beautiful write.......... You made words dance to your tune.

xoubia, a remarkable write indeed. I like the way you have split the person in your poem by portraying the outward beauty and a whithering inner self... A Ten Spot..

very beautiful and powerful imaginary write indeed... thanks 10+++

Fine poetry xobia, , , some thoughts and imagination put in a beautiful way, , , , keep writing, , a 10