Sunday, November 29, 2009

Shadow By Reality Comments

Rating: 4.7

Here is the semblance flapping in wind
Light when parades by shadow of wing
grace looks brighter by glaze of green
eyes seems to meander into love intoned
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Dr subhendu kar
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Ezna Stephna 18 July 2020

Great penned well in your soft words. Keep writing.+10

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2019

desire settles slowly over quest cajoled heart riffles faster by grin in verdure wave nestles on crest and trough in cadence rungs of ocean bestirs stemming tide ......./// greatly expressed; love it

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 December 2017

What a great poem Sir...felt amazed at the brilliance and the marvel of art in your poems. Sorry not to have been through your poems earlier. I would read through the remaining ones soon. 10+++ Subhas

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Debarshi Bhattacharya 18 June 2017

a profound poem with much wisdom! Loved it.

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Elena Sandu 22 October 2016

Lovely to see this poem chosen for the first page, thank you for sharing, I find great depths to your verses, appreciate every word, loved these lines time precision dissipates the illusion..... darkness slowly bespeckles to dew sun knocks door of mist genuflecting. Great coincidence or maybe a moment of serendipity, who could know, right before reading this poem posted one about the rising sun.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 October 2016

Thank you dear Elena for your heartfelt comment, yet i do not have words to express my gratitude. quite inspiring to know your poetic vision.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 October 2016

Desire settles slowly over quest cajoled Nice conceptualization. Congrats on the member Poem of the Day.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 October 2016

Thank you dear Ratnakar ji for kind comment and appreciation.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 21 October 2016

Darkness holds illusion and mind easily does not understand mystery. Reasons of truth are unraveled. But by glaze of green light appears and grace looks brighter. Very interesting this poem is really and nice one.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 21 October 2016

Congrats for being selected for the day.....

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 21 October 2016

Beautiful write... congratulations...

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Rajnish Manga 21 October 2016

Beautiful poem emphasizing the need for objectivity in life. Congratulations and thanks for sharing, Dr. Subhendu. reasons of truth unravel mysteries time precision dissipates the illusion..... sun knocks door of mist genuflecting

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 October 2016

Thanks for your heartfelt comment,

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Bharati Nayak 21 October 2016

Congratulations for Poem of the Day.A beautiful poem, loved reading.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 October 2016

Thank you dear Bharatiji for your kind appreciation,

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Theodora Onken 21 October 2016

Congrats on poem of the day my friend. i love it.

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Matthew Holloway 21 October 2016

Well written and played out poem

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 October 2016

This is wonderful poetry. desire settles slowly over quest cajoled heart riffles faster by grin in verdure' is so nice. Congrats.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2016

Congratulation dear Dr. Kar sir for the poem of the day. Went through your poem'Shadow by Reality' I assumed it as marvellous poem with thrilling expression. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 October 2016

Of mist genuflecting! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Asis Biswas 27 July 2016

semblance or outer appearance of light and shadow on green leaves of trees provides the ultimate thrill to poet subendu.yes that indeed the thing to watch and feel.so that the real reason of mysteries reveal in real.fine poem

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Nilima Deb 30 June 2016

nice poem.each darkness is the cause of passionate light...delightful write.

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Sophy Chen 21 November 2015

A good poem and thanks for showing Sir, Sophy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 November 2015

truth always prevails as darkness fails sun flashes out gloom there is always space or room

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