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Poem has dimensions---

i hope you understood the comment of Mr. Sheldon... 'NOSE BLEED' in the Philippines is the term used for 'AWE' or 'AWESOME'... your poem is great!

you know what all i can say is NOSE_BLEED i like the remnant of picture tells in the poem! the metaphoric lines are buzzing! the composure of figures are sosososososo good! i like it

Nice and interesting it's a also a good food for thought good job

excellent visual metaphor: ''My golden ring circled the golden sun'' excellent meditative poem, very well expressed ideas to convey the message 10/10/10

This is a wonderful poem and i loved it very well written

Brillant as always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! you are really good, and so are you poems :) (10)

The big is seen small while the small is seen big. Your imagination runs very high in this poem.