Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Shadow Comments

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Dark clouds heavily covering the sky
like the tears in my eyes that wont run dry
the moon hardly shining
like ur love that is fading
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AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 15 July 2009

thanks naseer.....really appreciate your comments.....wishin u the best too...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 July 2009

Edward Young says: '' Like our shadows, our wishes lenghten as our sun declines ''. Exactly like in this poem the feeling of melancholy has been encountered so wonderfully that it reflects the awful state of mind of the poetess..... Best Wishes Naseer

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