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Absolutely poignant! Thanks for sharing!

This poem brings out the loss of life, a very good poem and a very good description of the emotion

excellent! when you born in shiraz you could say as this poem! pelase tell more poem...

Beauty of grief... 10... Tsira

Such a lovely poem... Oh heart so pained, spring and love will come again! Dorothy

so wonderfully sad....

Lovely as it is....well done! ! ! Cate

Beautifully expressed Persian my friend......heart felt and tenderly penned best wishes Jon

good poem love i love it

'...casting shadows on the lawn....I became...withdrawn...'; the feeling of mourning is clearly express. Good writing, thank you. With respect, Jeannie.

But the dawn always does follow the darkest hour. Take heart. A pleasing, even if sad, poem. Fx

Poignant captivating and gracefully written, a pleasure to read! *10*! Friend Thad

All I can say is that there's no poet I like than you. Very nice work.

A beautiful, elegant, sad poem. Thanks Nighingale.

Hauntingly beautiful as all your poetry is, and so full of wisdom, thanks, Lynda xx *10*

it's Really Really Good one I loved it thx for sharing ^_^

Wisdom of life in those lines.. I can call it a small wonder signitficant write 10

Hope itself is in enfolded into the darkest hour... When you miss you life's reason, it is still somewhere in you, to be found as the sun rises... A beautiful sad poem..