Thursday, November 23, 2006

Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.5

Shouting out your name
Waiting for your sweet gentle response
All I could hear was nothing but the rain
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Francesca Lam
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Nice poem, dear poet Francesca Lam. You play with the light and the dark, which is not an easy theme for a poet. Very dramatic end 'shadow fading away..(see my poem The Widow) '. You have a gift, I give you a 9+, and wish you soon a 10! ! Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Francesca Lam

Francesca Lam

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