Wednesday, July 11, 2007

Shadow Comments

Rating: 3.1

Am I a shadow,
An image of something real?
A shadow
that only survives a few hours a day,
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Sonya Florentino 25 February 2010

'i keep shifting with the angle of the sun'...'dependant on you and whether you'll see me' such sad lines...i love this peom of shadows....

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Francesca Johnson 12 July 2007

Wonderfully expressed, GW. I can feel the atmosphere in this poem. Sometimes I feel like a shadow, too, so I can empathise. Welcome to PH and please keep up the writing. Love, Fran xx

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Original Unknown Girl 12 July 2007

This is such a difficult one to read, I feel your pain so much in these words. Stay strong, you will be fine, I know you have the strength to keep on going and when you're there (wherever that may be) it'll come...... believe me - it will! ! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, it takes great courage to do so. Keep on writing, it will help..... Kind Regards HG: -) xx

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