Friday, October 20, 2017

Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.3

I'll be there for you like a shadow
When you are hopeless and helpless
Walk with you in your sorrows
and give a hand when sinking in pain
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Rini Shibu
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 June 2018

Did yu know RJ shadow is the only one thing which does not leave thee even after one's death till cremated and then when ashes are out in a vessel the shadow returns did you ever notice the loyalty of shadow at the very least

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 October 2017

Love and dreams! ! I'll be there for you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thanks Edward for reading this poem... Rini

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2017

Beautifully crafted. Nice poem on love and shadow. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thanks Kumar for good remarks. Rini

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Sister Frances 21 October 2017

I really liked this one Rini. You used the shadow so cleverly as a silent hand offering help and a shoulder to cry on. Well done..its a great feeling when you write a poem and it just works.

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thanks Hannah.. I feel and write, happy to hear you readers get that feel

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Lamar Cole 20 October 2017

This is a very inspiring poem about shadow.

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thanks Lam.. Glad that you liked

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2017

'This is the way I am And i find happiness for as I am' - That's the way to be! A poem with words of love, so loved it!

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thank you so much khairul Ahman... Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 October 2017

Hi Rini, Wonderful poem on love and friendship. : : I'll be there for you like a shadow: : and You won't see me, but feel my presence the warmth or a chill in your heart This is the way I am And i find happiness for as I am: : The choice of words is so good that the poem touches one's heart. Who would not love to have such a friend! ! !

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thanks for reviewing this poem

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Practicing Poetess 20 October 2017

You'll be there, when he is down To follow him around And shadow him Invisible, yet felt. What a compassionate, loving poem of comfort for a friend or someone special who is hurt!

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Rini Shibu 21 October 2017

Thanks a lot poetess.. Rini

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