Thursday, November 29, 2012

Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

The wind blowing through your hair,
Hits my face from the same direction.
I brush the hair out of my eyes
So I can keep them on you.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Quite romantic. Delightful narrative. Enjoyed

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Kevin Patrick 12 December 2012

I chuckled quite a bit when I got to the last few lines. This was a lovely descriptive read, I could almost picture myself in your shoes being there. Let's not call this stalking just a muse of inspiration. A lovely read

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Dave Walker 10 December 2012

A fantastic poem, like it.

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Kanav Justa 06 December 2012

stevie freind is talented indeed, , , ,

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Unwritten Soul 04 December 2012

You have heart to live in your poetry..it like your mind bring the words breathing alive maybe hahaha_Soul

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Hazel Durham 02 December 2012

So original with beautiful lines, loved this poem!

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Stevie Taite 02 December 2012

How do you do it? Your poems jump inside my heart for a ride and then don't want to get off! Loved where this took me!

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Ruby Honeytip 01 December 2012

LOL Fun Ruby fact..... Some are autobiographical...some are not....I'll never tell which is which hahahaha...sorry Red. : -) I actually wrote this about a young girl looking at a young girl, but the meaning could be different for everybody. Insert own interpretation here x

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Red O'mara 01 December 2012

You're a puzzle. A couple of weeks ago you were down and dirty in the back stalls at the movies with your husband. Very unsure what you're not up to here. But very well written.

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Lyn Paul 01 December 2012

Great work again Ruby. One amazing shadow.

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Maggie Munro 30 November 2012

Memories of teen crush, right down to the pounding heart. Love it: ]

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Ray Quesada 30 November 2012

this was a pleasure to read, Ruby! i loved the twist ending :)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 November 2012

stalking of a shadow human is quite refreshing!

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Prasanna Kumari 29 November 2012

it was a delight to walk with your words in perfect joy..

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