Saturday, July 24, 2010

Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.0

A shadow in the night
that's what you are to me
a flick of light
with my weak eyes
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aida melesse
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Kevin Carney 26 November 2010

So short but, with so much inside. Great write and I love your ending. Kept me thinking after I read it. Beautifully done 10+++

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Afzal Shauq 28 July 2010

A shadow in the night that's what you are to me a flick of light with my weak eyes that's what I see can you leap out from your hiding place and show me your face? fantastic and meaningful...short but having a long story behind..really enjoyed it a lot..well done

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