Wednesday, February 24, 2010

Shadow Comments

Rating: 4.7

When you are gone
it never be the same
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Unwritten Soul
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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2020

beautiful remembrance; beautiful poem penned on the pure friendship though gone the beloved forever all were right all were enlightened all were delightful all were enjoyable on this earth because of you were with me o dear.................... now you are no more that's why i'm with closed door

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 April 2018

A true friend is always true and he is nearer to 'us even after his death. Our memories towards him become strong and haunting. In this regard it may be quoted...... Even everything has left behind Our memories keep strongly bind your shadow haunting my mind because you are friend that hard to find .................A beautiful poem amazingly shared.10

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Susan Williams 08 March 2018

your shadow haunting my mind- - - -the best kind of haunting. We need to carry our beloved family and friends forward with us for as long as we live and what a lovely way to be haunted! 10++++++++++++++++++

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Richard Wlodarski 10 July 2017

A extraordinarily heart-felt and inspiring ode to friendship. True friendship lives on forever. Great write, Soul.

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Mj Lemon 08 July 2017

A magnificent tribute, Soul. Indeed relationships can carry on beyond our mortal essences.

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Unwritten Soul 09 July 2017

:) Thank you dear, this actually a poem for my old childhood friend...i think we befriended when we were in kindergarten...and when we were 15, my friend diagnosed with brain cancer..a week later i lost my friend....many years later i wrote this because i never write poem back to that time...Thanks again

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 November 2016

I still remember! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Walterrean Salley 27 September 2016

loosing someone always is hard. But life must go on. I enjoyed this beautiful, heartfelt tribute to the memory of your friend. Thank you.

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Unwritten Soul 29 September 2016

Thank you Salley, It was long time ago i heard from you..hope things going fine there :)

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Christopher Tye 28 June 2016

It's always hard to lose somebody close to your heart, their passing can leave a long shadow in our lives. Very poignant and moving work.

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Frank James Davis 18 April 2013

I was taught to always speak well of the dead; you spoke superbly, Soul!

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Erica Santana 04 February 2012

This is wonderful poetry

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

you leave us forever Peace in calm with thousands flowers Bring this friendship together loved those expressions.Really added shadow to my life past or present where the heat was or is very scorching to bear with.I peltered some water on the sweltering heat of life which has yet long lost its lewdness over life.Live long your poetry.

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Shadow Girl 29 June 2011

Beautifully written - no one is ever really gone - just watching and waiting for you in the 'next room'. Take Care - SG

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Rekha Mandagere 23 March 2011

Good memories always follow us like a shadow. The poem is very deep in its meaning and form. Rhyming scheme is soothing. Nice son, for presenting such a nice poem.Rekhamandagere

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Pranab K Chakraborty 25 October 2010

YOUR SHADOW HAUNTING MY MIND BECAUSE YOU ARE FRIEND THAT HARD TO FIND Regards, pranab 10

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Muhammad Ali 02 October 2010

very lovely and dedicated poem, yet painful and nice! 10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 August 2010

Passionate and Pulsating nostalgia galore …live in memories of lovely days…plant them…see flowers it’ll give you …to bloom your mind into realm of full solace…fine feelings from deepest recess of bosom…like splash of myriad colors to encolor memories… thanks sharing… Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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yes friends that fill our minds hearts are always hard to find

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what a wonderful expression of emotions.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 10 July 2010

I love the oblique shadow.

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An intense poem. Shadow, like a ressidue of what was..Good one; D

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