Saturday, May 2, 2020

Shades Of The Transparent Comments

Rating: 4.8

Mystical dust thrown in the air,
The show of life presents its plots
Hell and ecstasy braided like hair,
Endless games creation plays!
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Erfan K Wandoor 06 May 2020

Wonderful poem. Please read my poems and expect your kind suggestions

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 May 2020

A pleasant life song, inspirational as also dipped in positive attitude. Heartiest Congrats on poem of the day.

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Chinedu Dike 05 May 2020

Well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 05 May 2020

Great! Well deserved poem. Congratulations for the POD.

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Harley White 05 May 2020

A lovely, lyrical poem, deserving of poem of the day...

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Aqua Flower 05 May 2020

Congratulations on this poem being selected for the day! A very poignant write. " All paths arise and fall back into the Void! " Desperation at it's peek. Nicely penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2020

Endless games! ! Muse of life with the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dominic Windram 05 May 2020

Delightful poem of the day...congratulations!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 May 2020

A well penned poem of the day. Well expressed and beautifully crafted....10+++

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 May 2020

No one sees it but it sees everyone, Rain and lips touch only in its graceful presence, Thought flies through its vastness, It is the heart. so much of thinking and imagination have gone into this poem. love it. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 May 2020

All paths arise and fall back into the Void! ..Thought flies through its vastness, The Heart is its other name... everything takes birth in another womb and comes out spontenously; heart a nature where are stored all sense of moulding worlding and in course of time it expresses its innter theory but the wise can notify its earlier sprouting // suerb poem penned; congrats for being selected as POD

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Ramesh T A 05 May 2020

Mystical outlook though covers all aspects Nature and all, no one notices it due to its transparency ever! Nice one indeed! Congratulations to the Poet for the selection his poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!

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