Saturday, June 28, 2014

Shades Of Summer Comments

Rating: 4.4

The sun shines down
The breezes warm
The forest nearly
Shuttered green
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Tom Squires
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Hans Vr 20 October 2020

Very well written poem. A joy to read

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Howard Savage 16 September 2016

Great poem with profound metaphors and fortified emotions. Short but to the point. Great read.

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Adeline Foster 10 June 2015

Well said. Read mine Spring Adeline

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Noreen Carden 10 October 2014

Beautifully written so few words making a beautiful picture.Well done. A ten for sure

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Chinedu Dike 15 September 2014

A poem with insightful and heightened language. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 28 June 2014

summer, beyond the reach of the year, good writing.

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