Friday, August 12, 2022

Shades Of Red Comments

Rating: 4.5

I took a piece of my heart & planted it in a pot.
It didn't take long before it flourished into thick red stems
Covered in red foliage.
The problem began when she appeared, seamlessly out of
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Kewayne Wadley
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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

Ok, I read again and gave 4 stars. Does that make 7? I question whether 'seamlessly' should be another word: 'seemingly'. bri ;) Welcome, 'new poet'.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

This summer in SC I've had tiny flies fly up my nose (if I don't cover the nostrils) as I walk down the hill to our mailbox. It's weird. 3 stars at least.

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

The topics line has a of a lot of 'love' in it! 'Abstract' sounds about right. It IS a strange poem in some way(s) , but I liked it. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 13 August 2022

Under the poet's photo, the state name has an extra 't' at tt's ending which is not correct. Ha ha.

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Kewayne Wadley

Kewayne Wadley

Groton, Connecticutt
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