Saturday, March 17, 2018

Shades Of Our Hearts Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes our hearts cascade in shades,
All colours masked like seasoned seas,
A blossomed tree that's sparcely thorned,
A hero in life yet bravery scorned.
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Sarah Persson
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Britte Ninad 22 May 2018

some melancholic notes- lovely writings great 10++++++

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Muzahidul Reza 22 March 2018

Heart is well penned here in your poem, congrats and thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Manonton Dalan 22 March 2018

beautiful it's a song thanks

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Lyn Paul 22 March 2018

Beautiful words expressed complimented with a breath taking picture.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2018

Each shaded dark place! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2018

I love to read this poem again and again. Each colour carries a new story and each line explains this very well. Consciousness reminds us very often. Heart beats with love and dignity. Life blossoms in freedom, love and peace. A great perceptional poem this is. Revisiting this values more. Congratulations! ...10

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FABRICE FEDELI 22 March 2018

Wow absolutely beautiful such great talent :)

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Sarah Persson 22 March 2018

Thank you Fabrice :)

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Sarah Persson 22 March 2018

Thank you all for your lovely comments on my poem. I'm very proud it was chosen as poem of the day :)

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 22 March 2018

Although the shades speak loud and clear, The gentler tones we hardly hear, But there they rest complete in view, To remind us what we need not undo. A beautiful poem with shades of poetic excellence. Congratulations Sarah

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Lodigiana Poetess 22 March 2018

A beautiful piece of work Sarah and a joy to read- a well deserved selection for Poem of the Day! ...10 Lodigiana

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Akhtar Jawad 22 March 2018

a beautiful poem, a lovely selection as member's poem of the day. Congrats.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2018

Touching expression. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Savita Tyagi 22 March 2018

Lovely poem. Enjoyed the rhyme, it makes it so pleasant. Congratulations for well deserved member poem place.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 March 2018

Very interesting to read. Colors fill the heart and mind once you are free. Congrats.

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Jeannette Heywood 22 March 2018

Brought me to tears. Loved it!

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Tom Allport 22 March 2018

a wonderful poem painted beautifully with all the colours of the heart rainbow? ..............well written Sarah

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 March 2018

Sarah, such a profound poem of day... congrats for being chosen.... huge 10+++

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jason 18 March 2018

beautiful as always sarah x

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

Wellington, Shropshire
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