Saturday, September 22, 2012

Shades Of Green … 2209-2k12 Comments

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My shirt too is a shade of green
It lacks the perk and glitzy sheen
Wish I'cd wash and do a preen
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Wahab Abdul 30 September 2012

wonderful poetry , my best lines are'' The stripes on it are a lovely hue Why I wonder, it wasn't my due Why is it available to just a few? ''

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Wahab Abdul 30 September 2012

wonderful poetry, my favourite lines are ''The stripes on it are a lovely hue Why I wonder, it wasn't my due Why is it available to just a few? ''

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Nurain Ali-balogun 25 September 2012

You brought the street rag picker's mind, full of wishes into your lines. Good work.

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