Wednesday, April 25, 2007

Shades Of Gray Comments

Rating: 4.9

Starlit colors
were that of bright blues,
with flickers of crystallite silver hues.
As time progressed,
...
Read full text

Melvina Germain
COMMENTS
H H 02 May 2007

Fabulous impression is what I feel in this poem. H

0 0 Reply
Jim Foulk 28 April 2007

i give you a ten on this one. it is a very fine piece of poetry.

0 0 Reply
Sid John Gardner. 27 April 2007

An artist painting a canvas with words.Marvellous work Melvina. Sid John.

0 0 Reply
Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 April 2007

Many colors of the spectrum are you, painting a picture so beautiful... Melvina.. Paint on my poetic friend, i will keep on reading tell the end... Andy x

0 0 Reply
Shelley L Baxter-stanley 26 April 2007

Such a BEAUTIFUL SIGHT you created so amazingly! I can see your words and I love your imagery in this one.Melvina, you write sooooo well and I am always glad when you put your fingers to typing...because it always brings great results! ((Smile)) Please keep up the excellent work. L, =Shelley=

0 0 Reply
Reinalie Jorolan 26 April 2007

smiles and a peaceful yet poignant reflection from my end from a very wonderful poem...your words do have small hands that can touch the recess of my emotions. thanks my friend. xoxoxo

0 0 Reply

Superior imagework employed here, Melvina...a spectrum of vividity & grande depiction...and perhaps a lilt of sadness for the grey that that somehow cannot see the kaleidoscopic view in front of it...Solid work, young lady... FjR

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 25 April 2007

A lament for a landscape that is slowing passing away before the poet's eyes. A wonderful command of colors displayed in this nostalgic piece. Beautiful, Melvina. Love, Sandra

0 0 Reply
Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
Close
Error Success