I felt it in the air today
Summertime's demise,
The crispness of the morning air
Caught me by surprise;
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Linda, I agree with Jim a bit, ... this has been done a lot though! That is not to say that you did not do it well! If I may say... Autumn does the same to me ! The season always makes me happy with it's colors, and in a way it makes me sad too! At least until the world outside looks like a great big birthday cake, all frosted! B.V.A.
I'm amazed there are no comments here Linda. This is lovely. A genty evocative foretelling of autumn's arrival. Highly scenic language and just the right amount of detail all within a very structured evenly tempo'd form. Superb and very apt writing xx jim
My favourite time of the year and love the onset of it 10 Thanks Daniel