Monday, July 21, 2008

Shackled To Depression Comments

Rating: 4.3

Shackled to depression
Intertwined, amongst my veins
Self worth, self love
Are lost, within the pain
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Laurie Hill 04 August 2009

Blind to the rising sun Of opportunity, to thrive Another breath inhaled Without purpose, without drive .... Excellently written, thought evoking work...

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Bob Gibson 21 September 2008

Such a brillint poem, i loved it, you are a master of the double meanings of words well done.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 August 2008

a poem impressively expressive... '......to thrive Another breath inhaled Without purpose, without drive...' powerful line indeed...10/10

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